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Giving you 1,000 % for a wonderful picture you done here <3
Она у меня на жестком уже давно хранится..И только сейчас узнала, кто автор Х)
Your anatomy overall is very good, but I feel like the breasts, especially her left, our right, is a little low. Your coloring is also very good, and the color scheme is one I like to use a lot. The cool colors on one side, and the warmth from the other can really bring a character out. I'd suggest taking a bit more time to blend your strokes into each other - Ie, the chest area doesn't look as finished or as "tight" as her head and hair does, because you can see the larger strokes. This also depends on what look you're going for though. Also keep in mind things that would cast shadows in a scene. The strap across her chest blends and seems flat because there's a lack of shadow under it. Same goes for the crown, and various other little pieces (right breast could use more of a shadow) clavicle bone looks a little odd, mainly because there's no indication of a shoulder underneath it. Feel under your clavicle near your shoulder - there's a dip where it fades into the shoulder. Also on the left side, there's little indication that the breast muscles flow into and are connected to the bicep. The arms end a little too high up. here's an example of what I'm talking about. : ) warning: nude women but nothings showing.
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See how the breast toward the top kind "swoops" into the shoulder and bicep muscles? : ) This is being nit-picky of course, and I do still love the piece. I hope this helped..